>>82815997>>82782614>>82783844Thanks for reading and I'm glad you guys enjoyed it. I'm also glad that the characters seemed to come off as natural, I was a bit worried about that.
I had an inkling that the feeding scene was a tad bit short when writing but I kinda just ignored the thought.
Anyway, I really appreciate the feedback and it's nice to know that my writing skill hasn't entirely deteriorated.
