>>90890388Dont take this the wrong way but i feel like you got lost in the sauce here.
Like sure, its a "fake porn" review and while it has some imaginative jabs...it lacks absurdity to make it stand out
At least for me the fun is that the actresses are holos in totally stereotypical and/or weirdo shit that Iroha earnestly engages on. Like the OG prompt having this line
>The delivery of "Pizza with sausage AND COCK" was surprisingly effective"or the follow up being about a specific prompt and mocking it.
Its not bad as a first step, but feel like you went into more of a "angry video game nerd" direction rather than a "reviewerbrah" earnest approach and that dampens the comedy.
Also id say you should up the Holo references. Its funny to stumble and decipher what is what, from a reader's viewpoint i mean
