>>79183262This is an insanely cute read, Anon. every single character is dripping with charm and even if not a lot was happening action wise, I was still enthralled by how you handled the characters, and how maturely they discuss the situations they find themselves.
I can't think of any criticisms to give outside of occasionally forgetting to capitalize your "I"s and one line in the early office section
"As always. NONE of you is allowed to talk to her" but this is one very small nit pick in a sea of charm. I can't wait to see your rebooted chapters and any future chapters when you can get top them.
