>>75242498But you haven't really went into how Anon's own lovelife wasn't great, or if he is even bothered by that fact. Also
>maybe next chapterNah you better not be doing what I think you're doing. I know you ain't trying to hand wave feedback that says to keep cooking just so you can try to add the right ingredients AFTER you baster blasted your own batter into the peafowl. I know that isn't what's happening right now.
You're gonna take a good hard look at what you've written and what you want it to ultimately achieve, and give it the fucking attention and effort it deserves. It's clear how much you care about this story you're working on, and you owe it to yourself to give it the absolute best of you. Don't settle for anything less.
