>>76505185Some really good stuff you recommended. I'll
try to check them out more analytically next time I read them!
>>76504328>You're just continuing to work on your niche smut artpiece.thanks, satan! It's really just porn innit?
>>76538154Glad you liked it - the ending, too. I usually go for more generic "good ends" where most of the loose strings get tied up, so I was unsure if I could make leaving it a bit ambiguous and not as fluffy work.
>I don't find the "sexual tension" between the two believable.Yes, looking back at it now, the first act seems the weakest. I could and should have done a bit more with the setup, other than have the sexual tension "pre-established" by Takeshi with a few off-hand comments. Thanks for the feedback!
