>>59325729Ofc you'd think that, you freak
>>59325740I mean yea, kinda hard for me to give concrete feedback and ideas without having read the story before to get the feel for it, so shots in the dark it is!
>>59325745Nope, right there in the middle of the carnage. Could give it a comedic spin as well from the perspective of one the guys that "died" but was actually just pretending suddenly getting a face full of tiger tits as she's getting railed on top of him.
>>59325851Out of all the chuubas, I didn't expect to see Nene in the spoiler. Fun stuff.
>>59325931>he lacks critical information 