>>724237dozo ~
>right after watched a turbojank old vid with her brother helping her to voice itshould be '... an old turbojank vid with her brother helping her voice it'
>de-coupledpoor word choice, just use a better verb like 'separate'
>, and goseems like you wanted to use 'then' not 'and'.
>I wonder what's her brother likeWritten, "I wonder what her brother's like" or "I wonder, what's her brother like?". The comma here is important though otherwise it sounds incorrect
>is he aware of the hijinks seiso cat is atyou can't be 'at high jinks'. I actually like this word choice but it's kind of weird, would have to be something like "is he aware of the high jinks seiso cat is up to?"
