>>54199662Holy shit Anon, exquisite work. That is a brilliant outline you've got there. I never put much stock into the alt!Sui idea since I didn't see the potential, but you've opened my eyes. I really hope you find the time to write this someday. If you add a few moments of calm where she's in control of her emotions and can have a proper talk with Anon, that would wrap things up really nicely.
