>>3807450Something like this is probably the maximum "tomboy" you can get while still being lewd. Or maybe this
https://files.catbox.moe/vqsni1.jpgAlso it occurred to me that tanlines would be better than fully dark skin if she wants to stick with the tomboy concept.
I do think OP's concept is already great though and the tweaks in
>>3807229 were a big improvement too.