>>21544687This was an absolute rollercoaster from start to finish, an exceptional end to the longest HF arc so far.
While the NSFW stuff isn't my cup of tea, your incorporation of the
Lamy transformation was an interesting surprise. Shame it never went all the way.
While I liked the story generally, the character of Anon felt a little different to usual, though given the circumstances, it's not too far off.
For as exceptional as the writing was, you did leave a couple loose ends story-wise, that I hope you can close off in future chapters.
Lastly, I'm so glad that you
killed off that whore, Marine. It was probably my favourite part of the chapter, and it was a really nice twist of the dice that improved the story in it's entirety.
