>>47833724I will start with the people who I am assuming are asking personally, and work my way through. Additionally, I would need to know your goals, current plans, etc. I'll set up a question box some time (tm) prior to redebut. Please keep in mind these are my personal opinions.
AlbertMornVT
Positive:
- Model might be generic but it doesn't look terrible.
- Pretty good at reading chat in a timely manner.
Neutral:
- n/a
Improvement Points:
- You are kind of quiet. I'm not sure what kind of vtuber you want to be but if people wanted to watch the cutscene then they'd just go on youtube.
- You also sound somewhat bored. I'm not saying to be completely cheesy, but when you said, "If I were to die to the first boss, I'd be very disappointed", it was kind of flat.
Recommendations:
- get Veadotube mini or use Fugitech reactive images to at least make your avatar bounce.
- If you were to describe your personality in one (or two) words, what would it be?
- I do imagine you have an internal personality. As a streamer you need to project it. Emphasize it, since unless you are well versed in theater or so it's hard to accentuate subtleties, and it just makes it seem "flat."
- in short, talk more. You don't need to be adhd 100 wpm - for someone lower energy yet still entertaining you can check out Beryl as an example.
Bonus: my rebranding logo preview.
