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Hi there, Anonymous!
It seems that you've made several statements, yet they aren't well-connected.
Your statements:
>pick me! pick me! pick me!
aren't capitalized properly.
You should instead rewrite them as:
>Pick me! Pick me! Pick me!
The emphasize capitalization improves the look of your statements.
In addition to the lack of capitalization, your usage of quotations relegates grammar, syntax, and spelling to a non-important role.
Your quotations of:
>"smart but acts dumb"
>"openly /here/"
>"hates apple products"
>"uses android"
>"programmer"
>"wants to forge a sword"
>"DAW"
are rather non-cohesive with one abbreviation of "DAW" being extremely ambiguous. In addition to that, there is a concerning lack of capitalization which results in a lowered impact of your post.
If you wish to rewrite your bait, you can use the following format instead:
>Is intelligent but acts like a fool
>Openly /here/
>Despises Apple products
>Uses Android OS
>Is a programmer
>Wants to forge a sword
>DAW [Needs clarification]
Please improve upon your posts as the lack of substance and articulation results in a poor product.
