>>80712535Very cute! This is only an example and I'm not an expert, but I think you could tweak it a bit to make it a bit more... conventional with proportions I guess? You don't have to lower the eyes so far like in my example, but I do think moving them lower would make it look a bit more pleasing. You could also make the bangs cover more forehead since this will consequently make the forehead bigger.
I don't know if this is too far off from what you're going for though.