>>89179516thank you for the feedback as always.
I chose ten of cups because it's a card that represents familial connection and prosperity and, when reversed, it symbolizes disharmony in the family/close relations. Yet... it just doesn't flow off the tongue. Maybe it's just a me thing but I just don't feel it for some reason.
>not enough agency given to the religious aspectThat's going to be the crux of it actually. The greater premiss is this will be the gods trying to reassert themselves into the world, rather than taking a more passive role in it.
>It might also be nice to feed into her living status and how it makes her feel, to give some more essence to what happens. I'll try to spruce it up a bit more than and go into greater depth. I do want to know what you mean when you say you feel like I could take the concept further and make it shine more though. Do you mean like more descriptive or make it longer with more interaction, etc. Because, like Lui and Mio said, they'll be going back to the shrine to try and reverse this so I'd love to know ahead of time so I can make the scene even better.
Thanks a bunch.
