>>27705812NTA but if you have time, would you be interested in reading my writing?
https://rentry.org/MelisendeAny criticism is welcomed, although I reckon one of my bigger weaknesses in terms of writing is that I absolutely suck at making characters individuals, especially if they're not created by me (admittedly not an issue here, but still), so any feedback and suggestions in that regard will be much appreciated.
Others are free to give it a read and give feedback as well!