>>61291317>Red in the AbattoirThe prose is good, way too short and the content is...well.
I dont wanna be mean but it reads like a "im 15 and im so twisted" gorefic. There's no real rhyme or reason to it aside from wanting to write cliche gore, and the fic just ends after one scene.
>A friendIts weird and barely makes sense, but its not terrible, just amateurish and way too short for me to properly care or even review it
>Idol StepsI liked this one. It has good prose, nice pacing and provides a great humilliation angle. Kinda wish it did more tho, maybe some sex or more sekuhara. As it is, its kind of like a fun fic that gets you bothered, but doesnt scratch the itch to either get horny or to get interested
1/3 aint that bad really
