>>74914784Ohh that was fun! Pretty tense, really feel how outmatched the COs are. I like this:
>The lavender livery was alien to her, and the viridian streaks accentuating its shape guided her attention to where its head should be – a circle of vantablack void trimmed by horns, puffs of green smoke prancing around it, as if they were frenzied cultists performing an eldritch ritual.Very flowery phrasing, in a good way. The smoke is some kind of nanomachine shenanigan, right? Gathering material from spikes from scrap around is pretty smart.
Oh, I just got to the part that says it's nanomachines lol. What a nice ending!
I liked the story, felt nice to see space stuff again after a while.
