some fic reviewing
>>81171140Well you certainly like wedgies. Cant say i do though.
Aside from that, its a nice piece about being sisters, just not for me.
>>81200023cute. Really short so cant comment on it aside from good cuteness.
>>81257717Again,fetish definitely not my thing but there's something here. I didnt feel horny, but i can appreciate the creativity at least. Good prose and good addition, so kudos for that
>>81281200I gotta catch up, but from what little im reading so far? pretty good. Im so happy that you took the advice to improve your pacing because this is so much better now that it doesnt just blitz through everything.
Keep at it
>>81282790Bae is a shortstack and gigi is a shortie. Gura is, indeed, a child
