>>271292hey anon! thank you for the candid feedback, i do appreciate it
i unfortunately did not read this until i was halfway into lining it, but i'm noting the things you mentioned to watch and fix next time
if you don't mind, would you elaborate a little more on what proportions and specific things you see off?
i'm terrible at rendering, so this is probably where i'm going to call it for this piece :) hope requester enjoys it