>>23258978you look a bit too edgy, maybe change your colors around a bit (you literally have Shadow's color scheme)
i like the spikey hair but the texture feels a bit weird
maybe exaggerate the proportions way more so you clearly look like a comical zombie but i'm not sure if that's the vibe you are looking for
i wouldn't shut down this design completely but be careful about what vibe you are giving off
also you look like Kevin Eleven from Ben 10