>>34853964Appreciate the feedback last thread for my prologue and I'm taking the thought about prose and character voice to heart for what's next and maybe a few reworks. I have a hard time finding the line between what's appropriate to get the imagery across and what starts to look like it's trying too hard to be artsy.
I tend to leave out a lot of dialogue tags in my writing for two reasons: if I want to emulate confusion in a scene, or if I think the sentence has a distinctive enough voice to get by without having one in something like a back and forth. I don't always succeed with the latter though and I'm trying to get better at it. Any more tips and feedback is always appreciated though
