>>55008389>The Tale of JoeThat was really fast. I like how things just went zero to 60 right from the get-go. I guess this is one of those self-insert fics since the protag was named, but I didn't mind it. For some reason, it gave me the image of a Kentucky neo-noir.
Though the motivation for Ame and even Gura got thin, I was still able to get on with whatever they were up to. As much as Joe was.Fomatting could be improved, of course. This was the half-twisted son of normal prose and greentext. Still... I kind of liked it. It was enough to facilitate how fast the action was going. Good job, Joe, or whoever really wrote it.
