>>23876158To the left, a long corn field with scarecrows stretched for nearly three kilos and to the right,I'm not sure how it's used elsewhere in the world, but where I live, "kilos" is a spoken shorthand for kilograms. "ks" (pronounced "kays") is the spoken shorthand for kilometres (or sometimes for km/h depending on context). In writing, the only usable shorthand for kilometres would be "km".
Aside from that, I didn't notice any problems. The chapter was great, and I was really liking where it was all leading. The cliffhanger ending is surprising and pretty unexpected, but if you capitalise on it next chapter, I think you've got an excellent setup for the next arc.
