>>34614435Great great great WORK!!!!! But I would like to offer some critiques (thread will end up going to shit over it.)
1. Please use quotation marks! This is a nit pick but it is needed if you want more than one person to speak
2. Watch out with capitalization! Risuners need capitalized.
3. Leave space for dialogue with the second thing Sherah says. It's a good habit t. took acting.
