>>33658729Nope I followed the outline of your post to a T, which makes it a very short fic.
I kind of want to expand it even more but since the entire thing takes place in an elevator ride I don't know if I should go beyond 3000 words.
Its sitting at 2509 words now and I honestly think I'm done. I didnt do everything i wanted with it. I really dont like writing in 2nd person because of the obstacles to giving the protagonist a deep seated motive like apathy and sadism like I WANTED to give this guy. As it stands it almost feels like the first chapter of a Wolf Girl and Black Prince fan fiction, but I'll go over it and clean it up a bit before I post it in the next thread and that'll be it.
Just to be clear, I click Make available to everyone with a link and you cant see the account its posted from right?
I have a burner account of that's not how it works but I hate signing into it.
