>>15662160NTR is cheating, and has many categories. The other party doesn't necessarily have to be involved unless you want the gut punch factor that really pisses people off. I knew I couldn't manage that so I just didn't go for it. Not this time at least. If I try again I'll go for that feeling if possible.
Not sure what was wrong with the POV, there's no other way to show what was happening to Pekora without you being present as far as I'm aware.
> heartsI was copying AA. His Matsuri fic is a pretty big inspiration to me, the part with the hearts was the hottest. In hindsight, it may be cheating, using emojis in writing and all that. Had to try.
>>15662052Wasn't most of the story fucking? I guess I have a preference for dialogue over purely description but as far as I'm concerned, it's smut. What do you mean?
>>15678300I'll be more subtle next time.
