>>45162570>the tension that was had with Anon being a distant weirdo was gotten over a little too quicklyI guess that's probably because I wanted to start on his journey of acceptance into the stars since that will take some time, and I also wanted to start developing his relationship with Watame without her being constantly afraid of him since I don't plan for this fic to be that long at all.
She'll snap right back to being terrified later on, though. I'm glad the chapter didn't feel too slow, and as for /vt/ making some connections, I didn't put too much focus on that because it was only one guy absentmindedly mentioning the disappearances. We're not that smart.
>>45166179Yeah, I put the 4chan posts in the first chapter as a joke, but they've turned out to be quite useful.
>you'd probably be pushing your luck if you make another 'slow' one after this.Shit, now I feel a little pressured to add some spice. Chapter 3 was planned to be the beginning of the domino effect that set events in motion but might still have been the calm before the storm of the chapter 4 finale. I'll have to take that into consideration, thanks for the heads up.
>I hope you can get another chapter out before next year.Well there's no slutty oni standing in my way now so the next chapter should come quicker than this one. And there we go, I have jinxed myself.
>>45166354Sorry for the wait, and thank you for reading, Anon.