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Now I had a bit of time to think and honestly Lumi has/had? a really fucking great 10/10 concept here but flubbed the execution
for next time here is how you fix it:
>1. shorter segments
it got better later but it would be better to have 2 segments with 6 minutes than on segment with 12 minutes where almost nothing happens
>2. raid your streams
if you finish your old stream raid the new one
pretty easy but for some reason I am still not sure if it is even over now and you lose your audience for no reason...
>3. do more enviromental storytelling
go to a new room and add a note in the corner or some meds maybe foreshadow the basement with a key lying around. Just something more
>4. no long breaks
like pretty much everyone has said by now dont fucking do long breaks between streams. you lose the atmosphere and peoples attention especially if they dont even know if it is over or if there is more
>5. less scuff
music not playing, the outlines in obs etc. ruin a bit of the mood
Most of these come down to preparing better
it's a bit frustrating because you can see the idea was great, you could see the vision but it failed at the execution because everything wasnt prepared enough
