>>2238245Ah I originally wrote this with the "I/My" instead of "You/Your". I just did quick editing of manually changing it, I probably should've used something that automatically changes all mentions of "I/My" to "You/Your"
Also yeah I also just noticed right after postinghow fucking attrocious the spacing is outside of the document. Do you have any advice how to put it together more? I'm an ESL and my brain just tells me to add space everytime someone else speaks.
>>2237419 Well in my original drafts I have you wake up, chained up, and at the mercy of Rushia while she does what she pleases. When looking over it as I edited it to fit "You/Your" I had an idea to make the continuation of you in bed as Rushia cries and apologizes at your bedside and feeds you as if you're sick. But damn, a "I have no mouth and I must scream" version of being a fully concious and aware undead but you have zero control over body sounds amazing. 