>>9297396When a request is made of you, I never really expect an erotic work made to get someone off. It's more like poetry, or a piece of art. Now, certainly I'll feel bad if you truly intended for this to be smut but your writing separates itself from the others in almost a twisted and comical manner. Can you tell that I am trying to replicate your style? Because I sure can't. Unique, exquisite, vile, captivating, beautiful. These words apply to thy works. I think having guided your creative process, recognizing which parts were direct suggestions from others made it break my immersion a bit, which is a shame. One can't ask for advice lest they'll find themselves virtually having to copy what was told to them. Though I don't blame you for it, of course. I'm grateful for you going through the effort of taking this exilid man's request, even if it did not serve the purpose I originally intended for it to have. I never actually expected anyone but you to take it up, and thus I always knew It was not going to be an erotic piece, but more of the exploration of a concept of despair. I wonder, do you regret trying to take up the sensual aspect of the prompt? Did it amuse you to write such a piece? Or would you have been more entertained if I told you it was meant to be hopelessness and not erotica as the main theme? Now, criticism. Because of course someone like me will spit in the hand that giveth. Not really much to say but there's a noticeable difference between your usual writing style and your words that are meant to be erotic. "Tight doggy ass" is a big contrast to "gross garbled ball of saliva-drenched insects erupting from her mouth". Unless it's deliberate. This is a minor complaint, but one that I think you'll care more about is that I couldn't really tell which position Korone was in. Was she laying on the ground? Was she staying up? Was she upside down? All throughout the story I really couldn't tell. Despite these complaints, it was a good piece.
Man, how the fuck do you keep this up...
Thank you for the compliment, hairpussies are hot and I'm glad you share that sentiment. 