>>19869756Thanks for the reply, anon. And for the critique. Yeah, looking back, I fucked up on the grammar and language. My fault for only focusing on the western theme. I’ll fix it when I have the time. Thanks for taking time to read it. Hope you like it, even with those problems.
>>19870658>But why start in medias res? Trying to hook the reader. You know how some books do it. I heard it’s a good method to entice readers.
