>>35503032Here's two more chapters of HoloJourneys, the start of chapter 3 was too hard not to jump into right away so I decided to just wait till both were done to post.
Ch 2:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vTyp-plYDwzwU4HBlQ-iWnttVS2Wg1Hvyxi7gAWq2_28FFTka0lefFHnJp5b3LP1Je_wy_sZD4L4_yn/pubTags: Watame, Flare, Noel, SFW, Action/Adventure, Fantasy
Ch3:
https://docs.google.com/document/d/e/2PACX-1vRwA-xPcYc_dyRPgHDNoielG7KP09vvTHKKu8kmal0ZOpwVjZDJOBM-uMb-vXONaphtY254WsP1BmQa/pubTags: Watame, Flare, Noel, SFW, Action/Adventure, Fantasy
I had a lot of fun writing these two chapters, since chapter 1 didn't have as robust an outline I was making a lot of it up as I went, from there on my outlines were a bit more detailed so it was nice to follow them and tweak and add things as I went.
Also these chapters were the first time I had to try and describe clothing, so if that part completely sucks ass let me know and I'll try to get better.
Any feedback is welcome and appreciated, this time I might compile any and all feedback first before making any changes.
