>>25114766It's...interesting. Like a lot of your stuff, it's a little too early to tell as it hasn't hit it's stride yet, but I'll keep reading.
Though,
I do find Anon is kind of inconsistent in his actions. One minute he threatens to not pay if she's hurt, but doesn't blink at her getting shot and even slaps her immediately after, only to threaten someone again when they call her a coffee elf. Also, Flares eyes are red, not yellow. Unless that's part of the gradual darkening thing