>>52897241>>52901896Author here, looking back I can see the weakness in that setup - I don't think I gave it enough thought, I just wanted something that Ayame could forget to do while gaming to get that League of Legends reference in there. How harsh a dom is is ultimately a lifestyle choice, but since I wrote a self-insert it not being relatable, even to someone who are into the dynamic in principle, is a problem. I'll make a minor change so it's at least a repeat offense and a broken promise.
The idea behind the 20 minutes time limit was to make it a challenge that she can use to redeem herself, but also fail - Ayame's over 1500 years old and you have been knowing each other for at least a while, she wouldn't have any issue making a good meal for you with more time. And it makes sense in another way too, since dinner has been delayed already and you're hungry.
Reading back over the story and hearing that someone here still appreciates it, I want to write another part of it now. I'm pretty busy and not a fast writer, but it should only take a few weeks.
