>>38799115The use of conlang names in the rentry keeps fucking me over, it requires the reader to try and come to their own conclusions about what exactly would be the best comparison to a modern word using context, which while neat for an in-universe thing, does not work for a meta lore document.
Also, we have to avoid weird shit like "Tsbjujzars", "Hyrhjars"(how the fuck am I supposed to pronounce this?)
Small typo in the third paragraph, "Finatshad" which I assume is meant to be a separated to "Finats had"
Anyways, it's some pretty neat elaboration in the pre-history of the Republic, the cultural influence of Hoshiyomia in the south is neat, it does make me wonder how I could work some of that in on modern history, I'm not sure how much of pre-Republic cultural influence we really want to have, but right now it isn't particulary intrusive, so I don't have much to say about it.
I will ask thought, are the conlang words here suppose to be older words or ones in modern usage?
