>>4379058retard
>>4372610The skin is definitely a lot better, but as someone else said, it's about cuteness first if you're trying to be a cute girl. Frankenstein is a bit of a monstrosity, so you might have to make drastic changes to achieve that cuteness.
Also, speaking as a designer, you may want to do more research into why certain things are made the way they are so you can have a clearer idea of how to implement them. Many of those old posters you use as inspiration had a lot of yellow due to the cheapness of the paper, and red was a good highlight next to the yellow among the darker colors that were used with the rest of the paper, so it may be worth trying out yellow as a secondary color instead of evenly spreading everything out, and red as a highlight amongst multiple parts.
If I can make a more drastic suggestion though, having the twin tails come down from the bolts on the sides would be super cool.