>>43628831I think the dialogue is just fine. As you continue to write more you'll think of little ways to present it to strike more of what you might be going for. As of this chapter everything read fine, I could hear the grittiness in some of the conversations as well as the exasperation.
>Spoiler I can't speak for everyone, but I love that kinda shit. I also like to take a "wait and see" approach when it comes to unanswered questions I might have in regards to the plot or characters if a story is unfinished or part of an overarching story. Some questions are best left answered later. Be proud of this chapter and keep on striving to get even better.
