>>28091077I presume your main inspiration was the all guardsmen party? The writing style reminds me of it.
I personally did not had much problem from figuring out which characters are speaking but that might just be because of my experience reading stories written in a similar style before. If more anons have the same problem I would recommend you to use green text instead of a single dash to denote dialogue. Should help with the readability.
Pretty kino already. It's also going into the /who/ story archive. If you'd like the tags changed let me know.
When you post a new entry link and wish it to be archived you should anchor it to
>>28081514this post.
