>>77811918holy god fucking damn, there are so many amazing little details and flairs you put on this one that pointing them all out would just be too long of a post
so I'll just praise you for what you accomplished with them, which is that you can tell the VERY different emotions and thoughts the 2 of them have; Noel is in a state of hopelessness and shameful arousal, while Flare has fully submitted and accepted it
fantastic fucking work, brother