>>65921502Going through all the under 5k NSFW fics
>A Cozy Evening in The FoxholeShort and honestly outside of the holojourneys joke, kind of unmemorable.
>The Joy of AcceptanceI already knew the twist from reading this previously, but pretending I didn't know who the narrator is...
The narration is actually pretty good at hiding the twist, honestly the only real flaw I can point out is that the reveal isn't really used for much effect outside of giving away that it's kanata narrating. Still it's an interesting twist, even if the actual twist isn't used for much payoff.
>Shiori's Fucking MonologueGoddamn this is the most in character monologue I've read. It's not hot, but it was incredibly in-character.
>Heaven, Hell and the USDA (All chapters)This was refreshingly vulgar and straight to the point with prose it uses for the smut.
Outside of that the weird AU this is set in. Which feels weirdly uncanny. Like everyone is 90% accurate but it's like you were adapting their personalities from a non-existent manga adaptation of the characters rather than directly from streams; which leads to them being a bit more 'lore-colored' than I'm used to... especially since they're all from gen 4 which is up there in having the least lore connection characterization wise. Combine that with everyone feeling like their guided by their non-existent dicks makes this entire series just feel weird character wise.
>Homely ReliefAh, I remember this being released in that impromptu mass release of mio fics. Looking at this again. It's rather meh, I remember liking the choking bit more but right now this entire fic just feels okay.
>Stacy PacificationThis is a greentext, and it feels more like an outline of a chapter 1/prologue rather than something deliberately using it as a story telling medium. It's fine. I like the idea behind it conceptually but a greentext like this doesn't really build up the idea of suisei and sara being love rivals in a Stacy off interrupted by aqua more than the discussion that inspired it.
