>>51951607Chapter length was good this time around. It felt like one consistent flow of events as well within a central plot line, which makes it a better read in that regard. You're also staying consistent in showcasing mannerisms and reactions to the various situations going on, so nice work! I honestly don't know how you're churning these out so fast, not that I'm complaining, but I suddenly feel like a slowmo now with my own pace. I gotta get cookin. Anyway, I think the singular chapter mindset you took with one works well with you, so try experimenting with that more going forward.
