>>31676745I did actually! I loved it! it reminds me a lot of "To Build a Fire" by Jack London, which is a very high compliment from me considering that that's a story a really really like. The wrestling with faith through out the story gives the whole thing this really strong emotional tension.
The prose of the story is really really good as well. A personal complaint I have about a lot of writing here is that a lot of it is just a literal description, with little or not use of imagery, but this story has a lot of very interesting descriptive writing, such as the repeated allusions to predator and prey imagery.
by the way there's nothing wrong if you story has no flowery imagery in it. There are plenty of good books that are just narrative set to paper. Most writing in the SCP mythos, a collective writing project I hold immense respect for, is no thrills just narrative. I'm just a massive prose autist who likes it when a sentence on its own is interesting to read.>>31676911Do! we need more conflict in setting IMO.
>>31676720I'll start reading and get back to you guys tomorrow! I need to really get better clued in on what's happening down in ninisani territory.
On another note I still want to do some Pomutori related stuff PP.
