>>104398472it felt too unrealistic and pain-free. i'm not too much of a fan of violence on women for the sake of it either.
the first scene was fine i guess, i thought there was going to be breast expansion. lactation is great.
the bestiality scene could have been better indicated, i didn't realize it wasn't an orc until she mentioned it.
i'm not into birth scenes, but it was the easiest one to get through i've ever seen.
outdoors scene was good, but it could have had more focus on the pussy while the guy was rubbing, instead of the suggestion, especially after the long scene of him rubbing her ass.
cannibalism foreshadowing is always good, but the guy should have been whoring himself out.
i love public group sex, and the implication that it was a bunch of homeless guys was great. by far the best scene.
the protagonist is really stupid, he should have been roughed up more.
the girl's legs being amputated already was funny. the arms falling on the floor felt cheap, but the cannibalism confirmation was good. she didn't even scream from the brand.
i don't enjoy eye penetration, but i think it could have been better. i think starting it out with her somewhat enjoying it, and ending it with lobotomized groans and moaning would have been more interesting and cruel.
the guy becoming a grotesque monster at the end was cool, but i think he got off pretty light. hopefully he's in endless agony.
5/10, vaguely interested in the VN now.
