>>102810318Looks really nice! Like the other anon said, having a bit more particles and destruction around where she's touching the ground would go a long way. A lot of renders tend to miss these details and end up looking cheap or like a PS1 game, so including them always helps a lot.
The pose itself is great since her body blocks parts of the background that would make things look less detailed, while still showing the city in the foreground. The shadow she's casting looks nice, but yeah a bit better lighting/coloring would help. But for a beginner render this is already looking really solid, good luck anon!