>>10940011ya. Speaking as a research scientist, a biologist no less, you want to spam 70 slides each with a big picture and 1-2 sentences, with maybe arrows or circles around important parts highlighted if you aren't gonna be using a pointer. I know kiki did not fucking come to get grilled on a casual cool/fun presentation at fucking all but I mean as someone really used to this and actually having to judge student's work all the time, I fuuucking can't help it and knowing she actually may need to improve and present research some day I feel it useful for her to hear my thoughts, sorry in advance.
However this is really an infodump type stream and so it's not like she has to review of bunch of work she did herself. Even so in essence every slide she has with like 4 pictures each with a paragraph next to them? Just for starters, each of those paragraphs/pics could be its own slide. Ideally, then condense each of those paragraphs down smaller.
Also reading a giant wall of text off your slide is kind of off-putting because then it doesn't sound like you really necessarily know or rehearsed it as a presentation - if I learn nothing extra from hearing you talk vs if you just sent me the deck and I read the words, it doesn't feel much worth my time. She did have plenty of cool anecdotes and extra things to say beyond the slides though so it's all good, she was mostly fine with that, just there were some parts where she was literally taking a couple mins recanting text walls which is a nono.
