>Sung with a sweet but yet a sad symphonyJust omit the 2nd "a" and change the pace of singing
Instead of "sungwith / a / sweet", it would be "sung / with / a / sweet"
>>16572614half the nijiEN songs have some grammar errors in them as well. the very first line in "God sees all" and that song is pretty much just a chuuni isekai poem put into google translate.
I stopped watching Luxiem's song when I heard "You're gonna gain or pain" Unfortunately, a common trait of all English-language Vtuber songs is that they go for lyrical meaning without considering melodic timing enough
And frequent use of the "just make 5-30% of the song have Japanese lyrics" strategy (which makes me question the purpose of there being an English song in the first place). "ALiCE&u" could've avoided all these problems if it was in Indo, but like
>>16560856 mentioned, English songs are "trendy". Even if your ability to write and speak English is mediocre at best, still force a song, because that's the music meta, i guess.
But I feel like the point of this song was just for SquirrelGirl to flex her vocal ability, and she did a stellar job of that. if you want the opposite of ESL-sounding music, listen to mori's "end of a life".
but at the end of the day you can find the middle ground between solid melodic timing and superb lyrical meaning, you might still only get... a strong 4 to a light 5
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