>>181978692/10
The stupid faces and wonky anatomy aside.
There's just a lack of intimacy or lust to it. I don't feel the desperation of him to cum, he doesn't even care about her body and is looking at the ceiling. She's also looking at the ceiling which shows disinterest in the situation.
In this type situation you'd want her hunched over, which allowed her to grind faster against his cock, and you want him to be a little more handsy and gazing at her with lust, it would help show his interest and desire to cum. If he was in the situation which he's telling her to do whatever he's just about to cum, he should be taking control or at the very least thrusting his hips harder in an attempt to cum faster as opposed to just laying back weakly.
The red background on the monitor is a bad choice as well that's just generally jarring.
Overall its not particularly great but I respect the attempt.
2/10. 3/10 for cultural relevance.
