>>22037727I've read it and I'm impressed. Ty anon for writing the story using this prompt, I'm so grateful.
Okay, before I say anything more I wanna clarify something: I'm not very hard to please. I haven't read much in my life, besides stuff that I had to for school, plus the books that I've read were in my native language and not in English. So even if I read greentext with elementary school vocabulary and it's written kinda creatively I will be satisfied. Now, let's continue:
I've always liked any type of media or literary work with this feeling. I've learned that this genre in fanfiction is called "fluff" when I first visited /wg/ not too long ago. It's the exact feeling that I was experiencing the whole time I was reading this story.
I can swear that you're brrat yourself writer, If not I kneel, you surely did great job with your research about Bae. From the expressions that the female main character was using, from the words she was speaking and the way she was behaving I was led to believe that it realy is Hakos Baelz herself and not some random female protag. You also followed the descrioption about the main male protag regarding his attutude about horror and since it is the same viewpoint that I have (that's why I described it that way) I was so immersed while reading the story. When I red the part where you were describing how they were procrastinating and at some point were watching Gura I chuckled a bit cause I actually really like Gura as well.
The idea of three different movies that are progressively scarier is also something that I thought was very clever. As the movies were getting scarier the characters were getting more and more scared till the little rat couldn't take it any more.
Bae remains silent in your lap, her grip remains tight like a vice.
“Bae?” you tentatively ask
A sniffle. Two wet and warm spots begin to develop on your shirt where Bae has hidden her face.
Oh shit.
Bae silently cries into your arms.This part... man. The urge to save her was overwhelming.
The whole "trying to sleep and not think about horror" segment was amaizing but the hallucination part in middle of it cought me off guard. I was legitimately scared something would happen to Bae and I wasn't mentally prepared for that. I thought to myself: "Wait a minute, there were not any tragedy or horror tags attached to this story." In the end it was all good and in retrospect, I find it kinda silly that I was so emersed into it.
And last, but not least, events that happened in the next morning (more like afternoon) were extremely heartwarming.
All in all, for me your story is incredible. I was afraid that I put too much details in my prompt, plus I later found out that some writers like to have vague prompt so it leaves more freedom for them. It seems like you found a way to work with all of my unrelated ideas and details and connect them masterfully. Even though you did all of the hard work, I am kinda proud that this story was born from my prompt. Once again: thank you, I really appreciate it <3.
