>>22891986Needs more punch, chumpedo. 'Nijifan' just makes you sound tribal and moves the punchline way too far up. Try:
A young man running along a cliff edge, he's out for his early morning jog.
Through the morning fog he sees a small figure as he run towards the figure he can make out a small boy, as he get closer he can hear him sobbing. He runs upto him and says "what is wrong little boy?"
The little boy eplies "my mummy and daddy fell of the cliff."
Vox Akuma looks over the cliff and sure enough, two broken crumpled bodies lie at the bottom. He turns to the boy, un buttons his fly and says "not your lucky day, is it?"
