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For the VN Kanon, I played through pretty much every option just now.
For the date option, you might want to word some of it differently, Kano calling her her model 'bad' is a little harsh. Substitute it for 'amateur' instead, maybe. Besides that, it's fine. I can only really say that the PUBG route in particular can be a little long-winded inbetween choices.
